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lettering page pt.2 by *bristol:iconbristol:


©2005-2009 *bristol
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:iconelziler:
these are very well drawn! you have a great talent for it. the only thing i see wrong with it is the fact when he looks at his arm and says it mut be dislocated he acted like he only got pinched. i think if you add more feeling it would be better. like if you had exclamation points and if you had him struggling to stand then stumbling away. i hope you take no offence. i realy like it so far and wish to see more, i just wished to give a fellow spiderman fan a few tips. not that im better than you.

Spiderman is so cool!!!
:iconbristol:
thanks for the pointers.
:iconelziler:
your welcome! it realy is a good comic so far though:)

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